DritchJaul, on 13 February 2011 - 05:15 AM, said:
I read your comment after I saw the pic, and I almost posted "Long mike is long" but you stopped me.....
Anyway, good artwork, love the little fang, however the eyes are what get me. The top part of the ellipse which makes the iris and pupil needs some work; the top part of it needs to be white. Other then that small complaint, I love it and literally said "D'awwwww" after seeing it.
This is me criticizing your work, I mean no offense by it.
I actually appreciate your criticism, I understand the eye issue, as I sketched this is in about 5 minutes from boredom... I wasn't sure how the eye was supposed to be as I was looking at one of the old comics for for eyes, and thats how the lines were in one of the panels. Do they're need to be more vertical and form more of an iris/pupil, with a brighter green value in it?