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This post has been edited by Positive-Scissors: 20 February 2011 - 03:03 AM

You know, this is pretty good. I think you did a particularly good job capturing the depth.

I like, I like. Oekaki, right?

It is a very interesting style. Reminds me of something, but I cannot quite put my finger on it. Perhaps a slight bit Don Rosa, but that does not really say anything. But yes, quite good. ^_^

Pretty good, man. Levels look a little bit weird to me, but the overall effect is quite nice.

Marshmallow, on 19 February 2011 - 09:45 PM, said:

Nah just ol' MS Paint :T

SushiJaguar, on 20 February 2011 - 12:05 AM, said:

Yeah I know what you mean by the levels, I was pretty tired when I made this though, but still thank you

Positive-Scissors, on 19 February 2011 - 09:28 PM, said:

Yes, please. This is quite good.

Very nice, from the style, color, contrast, the general positioning of people and objects; this is well done. However it is not without its flaws, for one Lucy looks too...eh...curvy? I'm not sure, it could be that her shading isn't dark enough but it's strange. Mike's and Lucy's fur on their chests' also look over exaggerated, and Mike's hair (fur on top of his head) has an awkward line that doesn't look like it knows where it needs to be; on Mike's head or apart of his head. This last one can be solved the same way as the first, just use less exaggerated fur. The last critique I have is Mike's blush, now it fits and is lovely, but the black lines are a little too pixel-y. Although that can't really be helped, considering it's drawn in MS paint.

This is my review of your drawing, I mean no offense b any of it, I really do love your style.