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Can I share this?

He I know this is the creative arts section but is poetry also allowed in here? If so I have a nice love poem I made up to share. :3
  • #1
  • 16 March 2011 - 05:18 PM
I don't see why not, there are people who do art that doesn't have to do with bcb.
  • #2
  • 16 March 2011 - 05:22 PM
I'd rather wait on a response of a Moderator, lest I get into trouble ಠ_ಠ
  • #3
  • 16 March 2011 - 05:23 PM
There's already been a couple of poetry threads, so I'm sure it's fine. Anyway, poetry is an art just as much as drawing and I will personally disembowel anyone who says otherwise.
  • #4
  • 16 March 2011 - 05:31 PM
Alright Sammy is pretty much mod material so I'll post it

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  • #5
  • 16 March 2011 - 05:35 PM
  • ILB
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Yes, posting non-BCB-related stuff here is perfectly acceptable, so you are fine. ^_^
  • #6
  • 16 March 2011 - 06:06 PM
  • Meowth
  • Please go easy on me. I don't like critique. Or my title.
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That is indeed a nice poem you have written. While in a technical sense it is very basic, the actual message it's conveying is nice and I think it was done quite well.

I noticed you maintained the rhyming pattern throughout, which is very good.
I know "apart" and "heart" don't actually rhythm, but I think it can be overlooked. :smirk:
  • #7
  • 17 March 2011 - 01:20 AM
Short, simple and still effective right?
  • #8
  • 17 March 2011 - 06:30 AM
Interesting piece you wrote redjack

This post has been edited by skykitty: 17 March 2011 - 08:54 AM

  • #9
  • 17 March 2011 - 08:53 AM
lol whatadweeb

Actually, it's quite nice. Just a little bit cheesy.
  • #10
  • 17 March 2011 - 09:33 AM
Mmm, never been into rhyme myself, but it's still good stuff. Keep up with it!
  • #11
  • 17 March 2011 - 05:02 PM
Not sure if I'll be posting more. I think it was only a revelating moment.

This post has been edited by RedJack: 17 March 2011 - 05:28 PM

  • #12
  • 17 March 2011 - 05:28 PM
By ALL means please do post more.
Short and interesting just the way most people like it :love:
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  • 17 March 2011 - 06:15 PM
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