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Before I lose my will to post this somewhere public:


Just a little awful sketch of a random guy drawn BCB style.

Randomly drawn mini-version on the top right.

Fugging handssss. ;__;

Critique wanted.

Drawing tips would be awesome too.

This post has been edited by MadMadDan: 03 April 2011 - 01:50 AM

Is that Paulo? Because he really reminds me of him.

Proportions are good, just make fingers a bit thinner, ears a bit bigger and neck a bit longer
Last thing, make that line that is conecting shoulder and legs inside out like this (

Other then those minor details its rather good. Keep it up please

Aw stop insulting yourself, buckle down and work on your art. You have potential! tap into it and really go with it my friend!

Two heartening replies. I so happy ;__;

@Blazer
That's not Paulo. Though I see your point.

@Prinny
Work on my art indeed. Thanks for the vote of confidence though.

Anyways, decided to try out some of that advice... Along with making the guy a bit more casual and having a more standard pose. It's still just a sketch, though.

FailFanart #2 gogogogogogogo



Don't have no scanner, so I took a photo of it. Bad lighting

Handssssss are still hard as hell.

Must... Practice... More...

Comapring the both drawing this one just needs 1 correction.
Legs = must be longer then torso + neck by atleast 1/2 more for proportional look.

Otherwise, very good job. I'm hoping you will post more drawings.

This post has been edited by Blazer: 24 March 2011 - 03:17 PM

Hey! the hand doesn't look that bad, I have problems with them too!, and I agree with Blazer about the legs. Also, the shirt looks like it's falling to his right shoulder, and the eyes look a little weird (right one looking down, left one straight). Otherwise, awesome, keep posting them

I think you're being a little hard on yourself. I think your art is actually quite nice, and I would love to see what it would look like colored.

I don't really have any particular issues with anything here. Proportions are done great, the shadowing is subtle and acceptable, and overall, you seem to be pretty good with the basics, which is fantastic.

I hope to see more of your stuff.

Happiness~

Anyways, thanks for the positive replies.

@Blazer: Those legs looked longer in my sketchbook, I swear. <.< Anyways, I'll remember to pay close attention next time.

@ZorZhen: Hands = Hard as hell to draw. D8> I didn't see that eye thing. Thanks for that. The shirt is actually supposed to look that way. Just thought it looked cool somehow <.<

@Meowth: ;__; I feel inspired by your words.

On the other hand... Coloring. >.>

Wonder if they sell "Digital Coloring for Dummies"?

Annnnywaays, I decided to sketch some more;


Oh look, a pose

Though it still looks a bit passive. I decided to give the guy a lighter eye color and shorter hair, alongside a more cock-sure expression.

Aaand another guy...



Decided to go with a slightly more different approach. Just a lazy, airheaded guy.

The quality is so poor ;__; I need to get a scanner.

Need to practice moar.

They both look great, I like the last one better, though I'm not exactly sure why.
The quality of the picture it's a little... bad, but the details are still visible, so there's nothing wrong there. Keep it up, you're doing great