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OK, so I'll post some sketches and things like that.
I DEMAND ASK FOR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.
Sorry for the bad quality, the actual sketches look better, I can't ink so I scanned them on pencil, and afterwards did things I regret some paint job.

Here's some pics:
Daisy "Forgotten" style sketch
http://img856.images...4166/daisyw.jpg

Colored
http://img831.images...aisycolored.jpg

*Fixed Jaw*
http://img638.images...isycolored1.jpg

Lucy sketch
http://img84.imagesh...4177/lucyse.jpg

Colored
http://img541.images...lucycolored.jpg

Augustus Colored
http://img718.images...87/augustus.jpg

Jess Colored
http://img684.images...017/jesse2l.jpg

the images won't show, anyone knows how to fix them?

EDIT: ANY suggestion for drawing BCB fanart is welcome, just don't expect them to be done fast.

EDIT 2: Added Augustus colored

EDIT 3: Added Jesse colored

This post has been edited by ZorZhen: 31 March 2011 - 01:50 AM

Cccccool.

Only two things about Daisy; her jaw is really flat, and the arms are kinda weird.

Lucy~ Her arms are kinda skinny, though, and her tail looks like it grew muscles.

Your coloring skills are epic, though. Keep it up~




Lucy, the girl who's so strong, her tail lifts up to 30 Kgs.

LOL and thanks for the comment .

Actually, I did the coloring digitally, so yeah .

About the muscles in her tail, I did the outline with Paint Shop Pro... with a mouse, I have no pulse with a mouse, you can see that in her right shoulder too .

And I think I know what you mean about daisy's arms, her left thumb disappeared, and her right hand is kinda floating there. And the flat jaw, I make that mistake often when drawing faces, I'll try to fix it.

I know I already brought it up in the IRC, but you're stuff is pretty good. I don't really see any obvious flaws except maybe what MadMadDan said. I hope you keep on drawing and posting, because I would love to see it.

Loving the paint job, and truthfully I didn't noticed that Daisy was missing a thumb on her right hand before you said it was missing.. ^_^

Little smoothing on the lines and the chin not being so flat (try making a slight curve) and you are up to do great stuff. Keep it up

UPDATE!
Added an Augustus colored image, I think I fixed the "flat jaw" mistake, it was just a doodle in the bottom of the page I was drawnig (that's why is just the upperbody), but it was scanned so i said "what the hell, let's do it", and here it is.
Tips, flaws, slaps, etc. Are welcome!

EDIT: Added Jesse Colored

This post has been edited by ZorZhen: 30 March 2011 - 12:42 AM