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- January 24, 1999
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09 April 2013 - 10:16 AMAh, I see. Perhaps the thread won't be dead forever, so I'll just leave it here anyways.
09 April 2013 - 03:56 AMI was wondering whether or not I could replace the first Daisy dress with this one...
31 October 2012 - 06:55 AMMy god Suit, when you said 'you violate a lot of these guidelines', I nearly had a heart attack.
I was so surprised and relieved when it didn't show the site rules it just directed me to a New York Times Article about writing.
So, I am always open to new opinions and new ways to change my writing for the better (since that is the true way of respecting one's skill) and I do agree your changed samples of the story is much better than the original.
I tend to stay on the crude side of writing, mostly because I lack the sense to see what was structurally wrong with the narrative, and thank you for telling me.
When I re-read the story now, I feel that's it's very awkward and fast-paced, and I don't like that.
Now, according to the article... I didn't really use the Prologue as a backstory, but instead used it as if it was chapter one.
I used 'said', but I often tried to change it to something else, which had obviously failed. I barely use exclamation points, and offered only skimpy details for characters and settings.
Gosh, my writing is worse than I thought. Only two things to do: Cry in a corner for an hour, and do some writing exercises after.
As for my drawings-I'll just flat out say it:
I am not able to draw males, obese people, muscular people, muscles, boxy people and etc. I can't draw kids either.
I don't know, I think it's because the female body has a usual that just seem easier to draw and easier to make sure the proportions are right. The male body-to me- is just a straight line.
Yes, I know I'm making excuses. Yes, I do know that I'm just procrastinating. I'll try drawing these type of people right now.
Thank you for giving that thoughtful reply!
17 October 2012 - 12:14 PMSpoiler
Ace, I'm so sorry. I am very sorry.
I suck at scary/filthy things, so I apologize for the utter suckiness and fugliness.
Also, the monthly poster.
... Yeah, October is just not my month.
15 October 2012 - 02:55 AMOh, your art is pretty nice! I especially like the style in your lineless art, that would be cool to explore more of that in the future.
Uhm if you are doing doodle requests... How about something filthy?
Filthy? My god, I don't know. The amateur drawer in me always wants to do pretty things, but I can do filthy-I guess. I'll try to do it after school today!
Thank you for all the nice comments and such! I do doodle requests, so spam me with ideas and tasks, yeah?