95. Love Again, page posted 11/30/16

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Love Again — Page 16
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Author commentary

Veronica: hahahahahahaah

This page and the one before it went through SO many revisions because the sequence is packed with information. If you alter one bit of dialogue, the entire jenga puzzle falls apart. Souppy tried to remove Paulo bringing up the con specifically in the previous page, but it unavoidably messed up Daisy’s reaction in the next page. For a while Souppy wanted Daisy to DECIPHER that what Paulo implied, but the line was always just too vague for Daisy to figure out convincingly. So there was so much writing and rewriting and at one point.. WELL WE MADE IT. It’s there.This page was just a demon when it came to the balancing act of characters infodumping realistically.

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I’m gonna assume that this is starting from the page Lucy ditched the group, so I’m gonna go from there!I really appreciate Sue standing up for Lucy. Like, obviously Paulo just wants to be with Lucy and isn’t even considering that she might not want to hang out with him, but Sue’s better at reading people than Paulo. Sue has many likeable character traits, this is one of them.I don’t appreciate Paulo blaming Lucy’s behaviour on Mike immediately, and in a violent way, nonetheless. Even if it is Mike’s fault, which it probably is, Paulo really needs to work on his self-control. It’s kind of a let down to see Paulo act so quickly to throw Mike under the bus and basically state that he’d rather have Lucy here than Mike in such a blatant and aggressive way, especially following all the bonding we’d seen between them beforehand.And the way he […]

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