95. Love Again, page posted 11/30/16

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Love Again — Page 16
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Author commentary

Veronica: hahahahahahaah

This page and the one before it went through SO many revisions because the sequence is packed with information. If you alter one bit of dialogue, the entire jenga puzzle falls apart. Souppy tried to remove Paulo bringing up the con specifically in the previous page, but it unavoidably messed up Daisy’s reaction in the next page. For a while Souppy wanted Daisy to DECIPHER that what Paulo implied, but the line was always just too vague for Daisy to figure out convincingly. So there was so much writing and rewriting and at one point.. WELL WE MADE IT. It’s there.This page was just a demon when it came to the balancing act of characters infodumping realistically.

Comments from around the web

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Oh Thank God.. I was fearing it would be like those “Damn you Willis” moments. Last panel worries me. But is a quite natural way for a girlfriend to react especially if she’s been brainwashed by her boyfriend.
2nd and 4th panel- Yeah Abbey. Squirm.
3rd, 4th and 5th- Ah so satisfying for the truth to come out. Bless you Veronica and Oliver.
6th, 7th panel- Wow. Paulo is trouble so let’s strangle. It’s perfectly alright. And everyone agrees right? Right? No? 
8th panel- Suspense…….
9th panel- Thank heavens Daisy. You followed your heart.
Mike probably can’t hear anything any more. Those machine guns sure did a number on him.

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