Eyes slightly high/too set back or nose doesn't go in enough maybe? Who knows, I'm a terrible-artist :-/ so I'm in no position to give advice.
It's a sketch which shows a lot of expression and I like it a lot for that. The comforting warm drink with the thoughtful slightly mournful look speaks volumes and matches that portion of the story really well. The hair looks good too!
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Just a quick sketch of human Lucy in her old school uniform. I always imagine she gets a nice fluffy sweater for those cold days.
Something's off about her face that I'm not quite liking but that's the problem with ink. Can't go back and fix it.
MagPieSkye on June 5, 2017.