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Candybooru image #12777, tagged with JayGamer_(Artist) Lucy Sandy

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Comment ID #81182

criticism is appreciated!

JayGamer 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81183

i dont think theres rly anything wrong w it considering the style and stuff. very cute!

if i had to nitpick i would tell u to push the poses a little more and make sandy lighter, shes gray enough that i mistook her for a genderbent mike

anyways wow good picture! **** u u did good!

SOUP 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81184

Lucy and Sandy as shinies.
Cool drawing.

SCD 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81185

it's really good and cute! what soup said about pushing the poses more, and maybe practice fabric shapes/shading more--the scarf fabric around sandy's neck vs the fabric falling behind her look like they are of a different quality and weight. i guess another way to say it would be consistency of fabrics around different shapes? anyways, good job!

irreverses 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81187

damn this is gorgeous

ChewySmokey 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81197

i think the style looks really cute! i love it! especially sandy's eyes. they're so bright! i think i really like how you made the proportions for her face.
hmmm yeah i'd have to agree with soup, i'm not sure how cartoony you'd want to make your work but you could try to push the line of action for the poses? i think sandy's balance looks a little off- like it looks like she can potentially fall over? i'd probably rotate her head and her left leg.
but anyways! i really like this! it looks really good!

Box 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81199

LUCY'S EYES ARE MESMERIZINGGG~

TravelPastel 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81203

Is that a Lucy "I don't like you" or a Lucy "I don't like that I like you" ? Can you ever tell with Lucy?!?

Rateus 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81217

thanks everyone for the kind words and constructive criticism! so the general take away is: more lively and balanced poses (i tend to be pretty strict with posing because i try to avoid overemphasizing personality traits, *but* i'm sure there's a way i can make characters look more lively without making them unrealistic! i'll research and practice more in general), not be so scared of bright colours (jfc she does look like mike...), and fabric consistency. good to hear people like the style though!

JayGamer 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81232

wow, i love the subtle shading in this, feels kinda semi-lineless <3

Terry 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81369

Loved this so much it's been my phone lock and home screen. Especially like they're facial expressions, it's so good!

ChewySmokey 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81394

Wow I just looked through all of your art ( I love your style) all the way back to the beginning and I must say you have improved SO MUCH. watching someone grow as an artist is the best because it gives hope to those of us who are still kinda early in the process. Do you have a tumblr I could follow?

Civvi 1 year ago.

Comment ID #81398

Oh man, that's such a sweet thing to say, thank you Civvi! I do have a tumblr, if you wanna look (I forgot to add it to the source like I usually do haha): http://jeicob-evurrist.tumblr.com/

JayGamer 1 year ago.