i have no idea what is going on
i have no idea what is going on
could use... some... work. other then that, I'm interested on where this is going.
Looking better than last time. Try soothing your lines more, i.e. more curves, fewer edges. And try to make and keep the proportions on the body. Cartoon characters like this often look good with relativelly large heads (like in Taeshi's drawings, for example). Try copying a few images you like from the booru for practice. Gnukko's sketches are good to copy as they have a simple line style.
Also, plan your writting on the comic, so you don't have to shrink the last few letters. A good way of doing this is first writting very lightly with pencil. Then you can erase it and try again if it doesn't fit, and when it fits, go over the letters more strongly with the pencil.
IM LUCY AND IMMA CAT GIRL
I... think this has to be read manga-style, right to left, correct? You could do with making your letters larger and clearer, and as Migrant says, smooth your lines.
It's very rough, the art style needs attention, and several parts are impossible to read, either from handwriting or poor scanning. And yet... I actually find myself liking this. Maybe it's the concept? Or something in the design? I really have no idea. But I do like it.
That said, "I'm Lucy and I'm a catgirl" is a statement that really has no place within a hundred miles of the Bittersweet Candy Bowl pages.
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there! i reuploded it, this time fixed in size. Thanks closetlucy! so, here again, please comment on what you think!
Kitsonpaw on March 14, 2011.