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24. Unmerry Melodies, chapter posted 10/11/06

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Unmerry Melodies — Page 2
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Taeshi’s Commentary On This Page

Man, I hate how much I failed with panel two.. but I can’t see HOW I failed it! I just know I did and from what people have said, it was a failure.. I guess I was just attempting to make Mike look childish and it was meant to be an aerial view, but it ended up a colossal mess.. oh well, atleast he looks really cute.

For those curious, the song is from “I Don’t Want to Miss a Thing” by Aerosmith. Yeah, the song is meant to be embarrassing.. and that’s why Blur is singing it so weirdly when he’s discovered.

21 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #1277

The failure is in the perception of Mike’s body from the top view. The eye for detail is a curse and a blessing.

Nomadic Scholar March 13, 2010, 10:21 AM EST.

Comment ID #1327

Alrighty… from my critical artistic opinions, it would seem that Mike’s body from top view is not quite long enough. He looks a bit I don’t know, Chibi maybe? No idea how to fix it though.

Kan March 14, 2010, 5:55 AM EST.

Comment ID #1773

is it just me, or is Lucy super super cute in panel 11?

jelloman March 19, 2010, 11:10 PM EST.

Comment ID #2207

haha Blur is the shizz. that was friggin’ great!

and lol. I guess it’s easy to say that Lucy is very irritable when woken up and is not a morning cat

MorphyVampy March 30, 2010, 11:15 PM EST.

Comment ID #4937

Huh? You mean there are cats which aren’t irritable after being woken up?

Standard April 17, 2010, 1:18 AM EST.

Comment ID #6114

lawl!

bored as hell April 20, 2010, 4:03 AM EST.

Comment ID #7306

That’s not true!

UNIT2960 April 22, 2010, 9:34 PM EST.

Comment ID #8340

who isnt happy whil’st(<—shakespeare!) sleeping?

bored April 25, 2010, 9:20 AM EST.

Comment ID #8405

The song fits Mike’s voice as I imagine it, but Blur… seems a little squeakier to me.
MIKA
No wait, not that squeaky.

Calvin April 25, 2010, 1:14 PM EST.

Comment ID #15471

fell asleep in math today. Took 5 people to wake me up.(It took 15 minutes) Teacher thought it was funny.

UNIT2960 May 5, 2010, 2:27 AM EST.

Comment ID #19401

That was fantastic haha, for a few there I think Mike was thinking it was just playing in his head :P

Rue May 10, 2010, 1:43 PM EST.

Comment ID #20438

Ha! Blur’s expression

Cuddle Bear May 12, 2010, 4:34 AM EST.

Comment ID #48029

Aerosmith FTW, I don’t think that idea could have been more perfect, what was the inspiration i wonder?

Alinaris June 23, 2010, 1:24 AM EST.

Comment ID #63324

BWAHAHA! Good song. Panel 15 is win… Again…
This page makes me want to say “Forget MikeXSandy, go MikeXLucy!”
Although I was already that way… Just further confirms that…

Skykitsune July 24, 2010, 4:42 AM EST.

Comment ID #78925

*in response to panel 2*

OMG, the characters DO have toes! o_o

Skygaze August 20, 2010, 3:24 AM EST.

Comment ID #78926

*in response to panel 2*

OMG, the characters DO have toes! o_o

Skygaze August 20, 2010, 3:25 AM EST.

Comment ID #80982

lol the Bad song from Mj(Michael Jackson)reminds me of Lucy,Y DOES MJ SONGS REMIND ME OF THIS T_T

David the dog August 24, 2010, 4:48 AM EST.

Comment ID #81512

You didn’t fail panel 2… Mike just looks like a cute little kitten ^u^

MissCaitlyn August 25, 2010, 9:16 AM EST.

Comment ID #82050

Box 13 - U should edit the first line to ” I could stay lost in this moment”

Kenny August 26, 2010, 7:11 AM EST.

Comment ID #82573

XD I really lol’d when they got to the loud part of the song.

Jasujo August 27, 2010, 9:00 AM EST.

Comment ID #83373

lucy deaf in thad ear lol.

charby_fan August 28, 2010, 10:48 PM EST.

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