Story Summary: Starting Over, page posted 10/19/12

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Starting Over — Page 16
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Veronica’s Commentary

Poor Paulo. Never losing sight of his true love.

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Comment ID #231546

And that is a bullseye for Miss Rachel!
But if she loves soap operas she must be thrilled by the chance to join this one! Tons of drama for everyone, yay! :P

Cavara October 19, 2012, 3:08 AM EST.

Comment ID #231558

Seems like Rachel doesn’t hate Tess THAT much, she just wanted a excuse to ride Paulo into the sunset.
Meanwhile Jess is mad at Tess for something she’s partially guilty of herself.

And it would be wiser to consult a magic 8-ball for advice than David.

Revo October 19, 2012, 6:02 AM EST.

Comment ID #231607

Anybody else get the impression that if Jess hadn’t been standing there, we might actually have PauloxRachel instead of PauloxJasmine? He is kinda instinctively opening up to her, implying a pretty basic level of trust, and she does seem interested in him external to her love of drama. Granted, I think she’s more into him as a cute boytoy than a serious relationship, but who knows?

Coyote October 19, 2012, 11:26 PM EST.

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