59. Another Path, page posted 8/16/10

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Another Path — Page 7
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Veronica: i am way too tired to say anything about this page right now

other than kawaii awkward badlyproportioned hug uguu

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Comment ID #76425

Well done Paulo. Sometimes a hug can convey feelings and comfort some one better than anything else ……

Sean August 16, 2010, 4:33 AM EST.

Comment ID #76494

She’s either going to punch him or break down in tears. Either way, she will probably insult him somehow.

X-Saber August 16, 2010, 8:48 AM EST.

Comment ID #76649

Despite the whole sorta date rape thing, which I guess is bad enough to regret, this path is so far turning out better than the ‘original’. :-\

Moreover because it sort of leaves Mike ‘free’ to be with Sandy and stop emoin’ out on Lucy, and Paulo in this path doesn’t get basically date raped by some girl for no other reason than to hurt Tess. Yeah, Tess is ‘hurt’ either way, but at least with Lucy she could had sort of seen it coming and what not.

Zav August 16, 2010, 12:37 PM EST.

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