At first I was like
Then i was like
Now I'm like :3
At first I was like
Then i was like
Now I'm like :3
Hey, that's awesome!
Well done!
The lines are really wobbly, don't be afraid to go over them again in eraser and smoothing the lineart. You could always use a smaller point and build up from there. Like I tend to use thin pens and then going over them and thickening them. I don't know what this program is and if you can zoom in, but drawing while zoomed is a great way to help not make the lineart look blobby.
Lucy now sees the truth of things to come...
Well, the art is not magnificent, but the thing you are trying to do with it most certainly is. The idea is great. ^_^
Cool concept bro.
I second that!
Ooo. I like! I'm not very good at criticizing artwork since I'm not exactly the best at art. haha but i do like it!
Haha Mr. Butterfly
I see what you did
Stop being a jerk Mike.
Nice Messege Dude.
This be KimmyKirby.
Very nice work, I especially like the expression on Lucy.
Great.
You had a really good start. But I repeat what Taeshi said, don't be afraid to erase and redraw lines more smoothly.
I can suggest using Photoshop/SAI and have a layer for the sketch, so you can draw over it in another layer, doing smoother lines.
Another good thing to use is photoshop/gimp's pen tool. Just place the vectors over the sketch and trace them. ^^
Never seen a bteetr post! ICOCBW
This scene is just 100% angst, so equally BCB-worthy
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Been wanting to make a fanart for a long time now, any criticism welcome, is pretty good for a first attempt.
MattyBatty0 on June 27, 2011.