52. Unrequited, chapter posted 12/21/09

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Unrequited — Page 5
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Veronica’s Commentary

This page started on a new book, I remember. Funny how things like that can always be recalled, I kept bouncing between really loving this particular page and getting annoyed with the fluctuating quality by the end of it.

Paulo is our own Dr. Phil, durpadurp.

Whoa, guess what. This is the last page of 2009 since the next page is posted on Friday, January 1st! Happy New Year!

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57 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #1759

I noticed Abbey is the only one who puts 2 and 2 together, all the other guys (Mike excluded of course) are all like “huhwha?” and Abbey is like “Oh ****…OH ****” and then he gets all sad for Lucy.

jelloman March 19, 2010, 3:27 PM EST.

Comment ID #98878

<< GIRL TALK! >> And off she goes, kidnapped one again… LOL

Come to think of it, Lucy’s last kidnapping ended with her almost having to admit that she didn’t want to go on the trip in order to stay with Mike (remember, chapter 42 “Invitation” - page 8 and the following). Lets see what she has to admit to this time…

Jimbo October 2, 2010, 12:30 AM EST.

Comment ID #182592

I like how Tess is the only one who doesn’t look embarrassed. She honestly looks as PO’ed as she can get.

Camolotthe23 September 20, 2011, 7:21 PM EST.

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