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Bittersweet Candy Bowl

Intermission: Turning Tides, page posted 9/5/12

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There is actually something in this page that shows Paulo is actually mindful/cares about Mike, I don’t think anyone will be able to spot it haha.

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Comment ID #227363

There’s -no- way this is going to end well for Paulo. I imagine he’s biting off far more than he can chew in this little challenge.

Also, other than putting them -both- with Daisy, I fail to see any even remote -hint- that Paulo is thinking about Mike.

Anonymous One September 5, 2012, 12:01 AM EST.

Comment ID #227367

I have a feeling Lucy’s competitive side will kick in and whup both of Paulo and Davids butts

Frodomann1 September 5, 2012, 12:03 AM EST.

Comment ID #227377

Haha! David’s all sold on the fact that Lucy’s going to get sprayed. It’s not even about winning for him anymore! I also love how Paulo and David are portrayed as shadowy individuals at the bottom and everyone else is cowering before them, suggesting that once Lucy goes down, the rest will follow easily (meaning they are light-weights compared to her!). As an added bonus, while Mike and Daisy seem terrified, Abbey’s kind of got a “WTF!?” look on his face. This page is priceless.

Good Times September 5, 2012, 12:23 AM EST.

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