Carry Me — Page 1
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Veronica’s Commentary

So Vero is asleep

I wish I was asleep

Anyway here is your page, the first of a chapter that will be wonderful and is 28 pages or 35 I’m not entirely sure

Apologies for the lateness, blame the Holiday Inn’s internet connection and our MacBooks’ strange attempts to connect to it

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226 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #170557

Oooh, this should be an interesting chapter. It might be nice to see a bit more of Paulo’s relationship with Jasmine. Especially since Paulo sucks at dealing with problems.

Athen July 4, 2011, 12:50 AM EST.

Comment ID #170568

Jasmine, you gotta make room in your schedule sooner or later for your man >:U

Mel July 4, 2011, 12:53 AM EST.

Comment ID #174886

She sure likes making things difficult for him.

Jenn July 29, 2011, 8:57 PM EST.

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