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Candybooru image #3098, tagged with Kitsonpaw_(Artist) Lucy

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Comment ID #22047

ok, im trying to make my own little comic. please comment on what i can fix and all, and this isnt the official first page, and yes, i know its looks horrible. i got a long way to go before im as good like taeshi or other artist. please give me feedback that will help!

Kitsonpaw 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22049

You need to work on paneling.

JuniorBoomer 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22050

yes, and what else guys?

Kitsonpaw 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22051

I have no idea what is going on other than that is lucy and maybe a tree?
So clarity, paneling, not drawing on lined-paper.

Carmen 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22056

This is a comic? I thought it was a random collection of doodles.

Poorly drawn doodles.

Anialator 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22057

What the christ am I looking at?

Anonymous #1 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22066

To be honest this is really bad... I can barely tell what i'm even looking at.

Stormthehouse 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22071

Sorry but i cant understand what is happening >.<

Andresm 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22075

Best advice I can give you: Don't quit your day job.

Also, draw on blank paper, not lined, and make the lines darker so that the scanner can pick them up. Other than that... smoothen your lines and don't be afraid of using that eraser, a LOT. I erase everything I draw some 3-4 times until i'm satisfied at LEAST.

Migrant 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22104

The guy in the bottom left (I can only assume Mike or Lucy) looks like a jackal. Something like Anubis. That would be awesome, if it wasn't so out of context.

Luei 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22107

ok, im going to take a shot in the dark, lucy is lying against a tree after ,what i can only guess is, being stabbed by a giant shuriken or something that looks like a star i guess, and then shes laying against the tree and she opens her eyes.
*crossing fingers to see if i am right*

jaskobs 3 years ago.

Comment ID #22162

nope, but it is a shuriken, so i shall give you 1/2 a point. and it is a tree. and its her shuriken, sorta.

Kitsonpaw 3 years ago.

Comment ID #23750

I'm not sure what it is you're going for, but I'd recommend studying, since this is an anthropomorphic comic, that you study the anatomy of humans and cats. Don't just jump in and try to draw based on a picture of Lucy. Figure out what a human would look like in the pose you want, then add cat features. Hope that helps.

Comedy 3 years ago.