26. Misunderstanding and Change, chapter posted 11/3/06
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Some think that it’s weird that Paulo was merely barked at rather than mugged and attacked.. and although I do agree a bit that the gang-up shoulda been harsher to be more believable, I kind of see it fitting that he wasn’t wounded. The thug just wanted to show Paulo that in the end, he’s still that weak little kitten that is deeply afraid of something so harmless like barking.
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But it’s still awesomely played out! Great job! :3
SushiJaguar November 17, 2010, 2:58 PM EST.
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Ew, how’d that jerk get onto school property? I’m hoping Pauly gets a heroic vengeance moment down the road.
toast October 11, 2011, 3:38 AM EST.
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I WANA KNOW WHO SHADOWY GUY IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >:D
Kitkat January 27, 2012, 4:09 AM EST.