27. Flirting with Disaster, original chapter posted 11/3/06

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Flirting with Disaster — Page 4

Author commentary

Veronica: Paulo’s side of the story! This part of the chapter was completely rewritten for the Omnibus because, as I’ve said in past commentary, I originally wanted Paulo to be linked to the bad guys from Confrontation as part of some convoluted attempt to tie storylines together. In retrospect, however, I found this plotline embarrassing and cringy, and didn’t actually develop it any further from here.

IT’S JUST TOO DAMN CONVENIENT. And so I’ve altered it to be something more realistic, rather than Paulo getting groomed by older kids into being a horndog :l ugh

.. Though given some way-into-the-future storylines, Paulo is showing a side of himself he doesn’t really reflect on for many many years..

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