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Intermission: Birthday Double-Team, chapter posted 5/1/07

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Birthday Double-Team — Page 2
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Taeshi’s Commentary On This Page

Hey, David’s description was pretty accurate!

I love the little teeny panels.. they make David look absolutely adorable.. hopefully I pulled it off well. I need to practice on color-coordination and stuff.. I didn’t wanna overflow it with too much warm-colors.. or just use the same color for different feelings. Big no-no.. hopefully this is easy on the eyes!

Chirpy’s arm looks dislocated on panel eleven. Yipes, I don’t know what I was trying to do there. Panel twelve is also a problem.. Paulo looks like he’s.. in front of Chirpy when it’s the other way around.. I just thought making his body stick out was a good illusion, but I needed to make Chirpy.. seem like she’s in front, though. Alas.

So yes.. I hope this installment was enjoyable. Stay tuned to yet another colored comic for this week! (Or the beginning of the next, depending on my ability to make the deadline) Then we’ll have an amusing installment.. and it’s back to the arc! Since prom is this month, whoaaa.

Take care!

8 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #5243

dog be so dead now >:O

LucifersAngelFeather April 17, 2010, 11:12 PM EST.

Comment ID #9111

hahahahahah ahaahahah, WHF FUCK U!

bored April 27, 2010, 2:38 AM EST.

Comment ID #22741

David… wasn’t even Paulo’s fault this time… (-_-)p

Cuddle Bear May 17, 2010, 3:56 AM EST.

Comment ID #60688

Poor little…duck thing..

Applesauce July 17, 2010, 11:55 PM EST.

Comment ID #64275

Bwahaha! He got them mixed up! Well, I guess David actually meant to give Paulo what he thought it’d be.
AHAHA! Paulo’s dead!

Skykitsune July 26, 2010, 2:52 AM EST.

Comment ID #66952

0.0
i bet Chirpy would be SCARED( i dont know if its spelt that way) FOR LIFE!!
poor Chirpy..
xD

cats4ever98 July 29, 2010, 10:20 PM EST.

Comment ID #67025

oooo heck nooo churpy don,t openthat or y kill dog boy

j the fourth July 29, 2010, 11:39 PM EST.

Comment ID #72997

… Why am I so right about such things?… ºrº;

Gaka August 11, 2010, 2:27 AM EST.

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