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Comment ID #226223

D’awww so cute :) glad Paulo woke up alot sooner than i expected but i’m not sure why he was startled. Also Jasmine i think Paulo’s forwardness is rubbing off on you. :P it is understandable though just make him feel comfy so he wakes up sooner and it worked yay.

supertails19 August 27, 2012, 12:09 AM EST.

Comment ID #226231

Jasmine just keeps being more and more likable every page we see her 8-)

Galajo August 27, 2012, 12:18 AM EST.

Comment ID #226279

Oh my God this one was priceless! A little maternal instinct from Jasmine, a little “I love cuddles” from Paulo… they were bound to go ape banana the moment they realised! XD
Paulo really does have something in common with Lucy, always playing badass and then showing litlle climaxes of tender-heartedness and cuteness once in a while!

Cavara August 27, 2012, 2:44 AM EST.

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