10. Off to the Movies, chapter posted 6/27/06

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Off to the Movies — Page 2
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Veronica’s Commentary

DAVID, STOP SHRINKING.

Time for some conflict! I was told that Mike was particularly stupid to not take back the offer considering how Lucy OBVIOUSLY looked like she just wanted to be with him.. but Mike just isn’t the type to really go back on something.. and this was merely a surprise. I feel it panned out well.. also, if he were to have refused, Paulo woulda popped in with a “YOU WANNA BE WITH YOUR LOVER HUH” comment.. which woulda ruined everything. Lucy woulda probably kicked Mike in the face and rushed off or something.. so it worked out for the best.

The last sequence of this page continue to amuse me to this day. I felt particularly proud of the timing, nyarhar.

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30 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #32016

i think daisy planted a tracking chip in mikes scarf

Austin Smith May 31, 2010, 5:39 AM EST.

Comment ID #152172

that “epic/suspence romance thriller with lots of jokes” sounds like the best freakin movie EVER! 8-D

noone knows March 16, 2011, 11:11 PM EST.

Comment ID #164325

XD hahahaha “there’s blood on my popcorn!!!!” nice move, lucy…

DD May 30, 2011, 2:13 PM EST.

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