“looks badly drawn” lol
Taeshi’s Commentary On This Page
Look! Finalized designs of the characters! Paulo now has a different eye design.. and David is tall as he should be. There’s also that fang of Paulo’s. It says “Gone” on panel three, by the way.. someone thought it said “Gore” and that amused me since he did an shopped version with Gore’s face on Mike’s ear.
Lucy has a mean kicking talent. Also I think I said “school” WAYYYY too much in this comic. The dialogue feels wonky in that respect.. and that’s ignoring the screams about school.
Man, this is taking the generic route. Isn’t it deliciously coincidental how a lot of the characters in school comics end up in the same classes together?
19 Reader Comments On This Page
Comment ID #4499
Comment ID #5967
dude taeshi, u r making ur own chracters critic ur work……
Comment ID #6106
What in the HELL is coming out of David’s mouth?!?
Comment ID #7110
David uses BREATH! IT’S SUPER EFFECTIVE!!!!
Comment ID #9151
STOP YELLING! You make no sense.
Comment ID #11313
Davids Firing his LAZERZ!
Comment ID #17643
OH NO! PANAL NINE, DAVID BROKE THE FORTH WALL!!! lol
Comment ID #20427
David can barf on command!
Comment ID #22495
Go random Yashy!
Comment ID #40322
yashy XD
Comment ID #47101
What the hell, is David puking!? Good to see Paulo and Yashy are always subtle. XD
Comment ID #48572
Wild School appeared!
David used Flamethrower!
It’s not very effective…
Comment ID #50604
OMG, David in the second Panel!! *Shudder*
I’m gonna have nightmares about that tonight…
Comment ID #50605
All hell breaks loose when you use comedy in your comic.
All hell… O-o
Comment ID #59695
i want a fire breath- ing dog like david! mike gets ARROWED!
Comment ID #63823
paulos flyin!!!yay
Comment ID #66667
Why is Paulo flying!?
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FLY PAULO FLY!
Comment ID #83312
i love lucy!!!
paulo got jackslapped across pannel 15 lol.
Comment ID #1318
It’s also convenient ^.6
Kan March 14, 2010, 4:43 AM EST.