33. Onwards to Adventure, chapter posted 2/23/07

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Onwards to Adventure — Page 1

Taeshi’s Commentary On This Page

Hello and welcome to another update — this week being of something amusing.. and isn’t it coincidental that on the week an amusing comic is due, it ends up being David’s birthday? I guess I didn’t have to pause and delay anything afterall!

So yeah.. this is a warning before I continue, though.. this comic is going to be very crap. And by crap, I mean I didn’t put much effort into drawing this. It’s a bit terrible to say.. but David always seemed like a blobby character to be and it’s honestly really hard to draw him.. seriously sometimes.. so everything begins to lack the more I draw David. So yeah.. this first page definitely had more effort put to it, but you’ll see quality deteriorate in the next few pages.. the downhill being the fourth page on. Still convinced on reading this? Let’s go!

”Kikiri kikiii” is actually meant to be the spanish version of when a rooster does the “cockle-doodle-doo”.. but I always thought the spanish version was better.. hence why I used it. I was meaning to make David make some obscure spanish reference, but I didn’t bother.. he wouldn’t be so bright in the morning.. then again, today’s meant to be an exception for him.

He is quite a rubbery fellow, isn’t he? Seriously, David is such a blob.. and speaking of which, we get to see a bit of his mother! Her job is meant to be a mystery, but it’s quite serious business, I assure you. David is unhappy over having to attend school like any other day.

9 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #7415

“Skip school already.”

UNIT2960 April 23, 2010, 1:17 AM EST.

Comment ID #8536

how da heck does she kno these things??? shes a black magic witch…..

bored April 25, 2010, 9:24 PM EST.

Comment ID #9351

i like the dutch version more of the rooster sound more: Kukelekuu!

BlackD April 27, 2010, 7:58 PM EST.

Comment ID #14561

Can Lucy read minds? I wouldn’t have thought of that.

ArchDemon of Revenge May 3, 2010, 11:25 PM EST.

Comment ID #18239

Hahaha, “I’m a big boy now, mommy.” Love this comic :)

CuteFuzzyWerewolf May 8, 2010, 6:44 PM EST.

Comment ID #27568

His maturity level gradually went up, then plummeted… pick it up David… but every comic needs a David… (-_-)p

Cuddle Bear May 26, 2010, 4:04 AM EST.

Comment ID #29754

Perhaps Lucy is a frequent class-cutter. She kind of knows the apprehension to going to class sometimes.

W31RD0 May 28, 2010, 2:31 AM EST.

Comment ID #49065

Haha, I just realized David’s birthday is only 2 days before mine. BIRTHDAY BUDS

….

yup

Emi June 24, 2010, 4:45 PM EST.

Comment ID #66569

Aren’t birthdays in color?

Your Random Name here :3 July 29, 2010, 8:22 AM EST.

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