33. Onwards to Adventure, chapter posted 2/23/07

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Onwards to Adventure — Page 4
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I cannot describe to you how much I tried to make “Hold it!” look SEMI-DECENT.

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Comment ID #2275

“OBJECTION!! I don’t wanna jump in the bushes, Mister Rainpop!” D:

Solario the Visored April 1, 2010, 5:13 AM EST.

Comment ID #60362

kidnapping adventures!!!!!! yah….

stranger July 16, 2010, 4:01 PM EST.

Comment ID #106183

Poor kid.
David is literally dragging him around…

Lyucs October 17, 2010, 1:25 AM EST.

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