On Our Own — Page 1
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Veronica’s Commentary

Hello! New chapter, whooo! And it is not that short, either! This one was written by Souppy.

I tried to go for a kind of different style, too. It needs a bit of work but I am going to try and stick to it and see what happens! Experimentation!!!

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297 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #180475

Augustus just cant help but look evil, can he?

Redneck September 5, 2011, 2:35 AM EST.

Comment ID #180496

that girl up top looks quite angry at her piece of paper O3O

Kitsune September 5, 2011, 3:04 AM EST.

Comment ID #180567

He seems… up to something

nat3prodigy September 5, 2011, 9:12 AM EST.

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