On Our Own — Page 3
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Oliver’s Commentary

I applied a new kind of texture to this page and the previous ones. I think this chapter looks really beautiful now, Veronica did a great job.

There was a fair bit of revision done to the dialogue on this page, too. Vero cleaned up a lot of it. The thing that you don’t realise when writing a script for pages like these is that it's so easy to lapse into WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS, even if they seem like a simple paragraph in a text file. In other words, can see how easily you can end up with wacky gamers and talking Xboxes if you don't keep the visuals in mind the whole way through. :S

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233 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #181213

Hey takes a special bus.

CallMeTom September 9, 2011, 12:00 AM EST.

Comment ID #181238

YOU KNOW WHAT ELSE HE DOES??

EVIL STUFF.
THATS WHAT.

MissCaitlyn September 9, 2011, 12:07 AM EST.

Comment ID #181259

Lucy, if u follow him, u will learn a terrible truth

Redneck September 9, 2011, 12:32 AM EST.

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