66. On Our Own, page posted 9/9/11
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Author Commentary
I applied a new kind of texture to this page and the previous ones. I think this chapter looks really beautiful now, Veronica did a great job.
There was a fair bit of revision done to the dialogue on this page, too. Vero cleaned up a lot of it. The thing that you don’t realise when writing a script for pages like these is that it's so easy to lapse into WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS, even if they seem like a simple paragraph in a text file. In other words, can see how easily you can end up with wacky gamers and talking Xboxes if you don't keep the visuals in mind the whole way through. :S
— SuitCase
A glitch in spines wastes lives
Bittersweet Club International
Serenade
Here you go
Abbey can’t stop the beat
i dunno lol
232 Reader Comments On This Page
Comment ID #181213
Hey takes a special bus.
CallMeTom September 9, 2011, 12:00 AM EST.
Comment ID #181238
YOU KNOW WHAT ELSE HE DOES??
EVIL STUFF.
THATS WHAT.
MissCaitlyn September 9, 2011, 12:07 AM EST.
Comment ID #181259
Lucy, if u follow him, u will learn a terrible truth
Redneck September 9, 2011, 12:32 AM EST.