Give refining your perspective a whirl
Unless Augustus is two stories up it doesn't add up.
I envy ur shading though good job.
Also abbey doesnt have back hair nor does daisy have a chest
Ps abbey has hoverhand
Give refining your perspective a whirl
Unless Augustus is two stories up it doesn't add up.
I envy ur shading though good job.
Also abbey doesnt have back hair nor does daisy have a chest
Ps abbey has hoverhand
I like how you made the sidewalk. The blocks are uniform and pleasing to the eyes, color-wise It's greyish and plain yet it looks so textured like that. Gives the thing a concrete 3d feel. It is weird that a sidewalk is that cramped but those things do exist.
The way the umbrella's colored is good too. Maybe it's the direction of the strokes but it makes the color solid and not as grainy as the rest of the pic.
Aside from that your anatomy needs work, and those walls look flat. On one of the walls the white bits between the bricks should look deeper. And on the other one the door looks like it was painted on the wall and not built on it. You can apply something similar to what you did with the sidewalk on that.
Abbey has a right hand on his left arm.
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So yeah, those awkward lighter vertical lines are supposed to be rain. Moral of the story is I can't draw rain. I'm a novice artist and I struggle with things like shadows and rain. That being said, I'd love to hear stylistic suggestions or just any comment you have. =]
Fritjof on April 2, 2012.