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Bittersweet Candy Bowl

32. Follow Me, chapter posted 2/18/07

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Taeshi’s Commentary On This Page

I redid panel five SO MANY TIMES.. and I’m shocked it didn’t end up a total mess! Anyway.. we see why Lucy has been so twitchy all this time.. just the paranoia about what Yashy might think about Sandy. Yes.. Sandy is completely nonexistant to Yashy.

Daisy is not really randomly upset, mind you.. come on, I’m sure Mike and Lucy under the table will spark some suspicion from some about what they might be doing.. which is unfair in Daisy’s opinion. I guess what I’m talking about will be explained a bit more as we go on.. I just thought that particular scene seemed.. unclear. Then again, I really shouldn’t keep stating out my motives! It’s up to the reader to really dissect scenes.. but oh well.. useless freebie for you guys! It’s not like I haven’t done it before.. I fear looking back at my old commentary.

Thinking about it again, what I’m saying sort of sounds a bit weird and ambiguous.. well.. in my opinion. So maybe I’m not being a complete blabbermouth! Anyway, onto some drama!

11 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #7411

So dramatic

UNIT2960 April 23, 2010, 1:04 AM EST.

Comment ID #8530

at least u didnt say first comment, annoying bastard

bored April 25, 2010, 9:18 PM EST.

Comment ID #8594

The lolicon is here.

Calvin April 26, 2010, 1:38 AM EST.

Comment ID #8623

people who say first comment should get their commenting licenses revoked because WHAT A POINTLESS THING TO SAY SERIOUSLY

SERIOUSLY

seriously

Taeshi April 26, 2010, 2:37 AM EST.

Comment ID #9336

cheater!

BlackD April 27, 2010, 5:21 PM EST.

Comment ID #9454

“First Comment”.HAHAHAHAHAHA!

UNIT2960 April 28, 2010, 2:56 AM EST.

Comment ID #14559

Did she kick him where I think she did? Ouch. Pwned.

ArchDemon of Revenge May 3, 2010, 11:24 PM EST.

Comment ID #16978

Sorry Taeshi, I’ll stop in respect of you(and I just read your comment.)

UNIT2960 May 6, 2010, 11:57 PM EST.

Comment ID #26690

With his ears, Abby can hear all! O.O

Cuddle Bear May 24, 2010, 10:37 PM EST.

Comment ID #29612

NUTSHOT!!!!

this guy May 27, 2010, 11:44 PM EST.

Comment ID #72955

ºrº

Gaka August 11, 2010, 12:38 AM EST.

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