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Bittersweet Candy Bowl

36. Under Pressure, chapter posted 3/17/07

Page 2 of 10

Under Pressure — Page 2
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Taeshi’s Commentary On This Page

I was in a phase of frustration when I did the second page.. so I left this comic unfinished for some days before I finally picked it up and continued. I like the beginning.. having Sue actually PARTICIPATE and stuff. She needs a bit more spotlight..

Those three girls have always been this way.. even during their debut in the old series side story.. so don’t mind their.. strange dialogue. As explained in the past, the one to the farthest left always speaks in questions, the one in the middle speaks in exclamations, and the one in the right speaks sort of flirtatious or ending her sentences in “..”s. Silly girls. Daisy isn’t really feeling so happy over their passing comments in the background.. but it’s kind of easy to sometimes take in to “suggestions”.. especially when you’re beginning to doubt yourself.

So close to tapping that Maishul ass, guess it wasn’t meant to be for that moment.

6 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #8677

the only line i read out of ur commentary was the last one and it made me raise questions that i really am too lazy to answer

bored April 26, 2010, 4:47 AM EST.

Comment ID #8687

woot! i’m right behind you, bored!

MacGyver Adrian Caboose April 26, 2010, 5:24 AM EST.

Comment ID #8704

How do you even double post anymore? What on earth are you doing, submitting, changing your post, refreshing, not reading to see if your post was there..

SuitCase April 26, 2010, 6:06 AM EST.

Comment ID #9991

It’s a glitch that happens to me because I’m on the PSP.

UNIT2960 April 29, 2010, 1:48 AM EST.

Comment ID #27588

@Suitcase
Sometimes someone will post, then post again somewhere else, check back on they’re old post, and decide to post another one. Usually it’s a spelling mistake, something they want to add, or changing something…

Cuddle Bear May 26, 2010, 4:22 AM EST.

Comment ID #74955

its funny how i really want to see some sex in this series

dustball August 14, 2010, 5:20 AM EST.

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