35. Under Pressure, original chapter posted 3/17/07

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Under Pressure — Page 2

This chapter was remade for the Bittersweet Candy Bowl Omnibus. The updated version will appear on the site later.

Author commentary

Veronica: When I drew the earlier version of this page I was originally pretty frustrated.. I left it unfinished for a few days before I finally picked it up and continued.

I guess there’s technically a lot of floating around and talking, maybe that’s why I was annoyed? I guess it was also because I wanted to make the dialogue natural and good.. which was only fully corrected in the redraw/rewrite! I definitely like it much better these days, and I like the three weird girls. That was probably why I was fatigued in the first place. Because of their pattern of speech.

The three weird girls (taken from the pre-BCB comics I used to draw) have always been this way: the one to the left always speaks in questions, the one in the middle speaks in exclamations, and the one on the right speaks sort of flirtatious way or ends her sentences with an ellipsis. VERY SILLY MEME, BUT I LIKED IT. That’s probably why I had trouble with this page, initially! I had to follow specific rules, but now I have Souppy as an editor! And I’ve become a better writer to boot!

A preview of the upcoming BCB page.

Reader comments

Comment ID #161654

Daisy looks SO depressed…I feel so sorry for her… :(

NintendoSegaSonyGuy May 17, 2011, 10:15 PM EDT.

Comment ID #208910

I feel sorry for you, Daisy :(

FairyTalegurl February 13, 2012, 4:04 PM EST.

Comment ID #209755

So those girls think daisy took Lucy?
Niiiice

Sairion February 18, 2012, 11:07 AM EST.

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