48. Pick Me Up, chapter posted 3/31/09

Page 8 of 11

Pick Me Up — Page 8
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Veronica’s Commentary

I seem to have a habit in this chapter where I make the last panel a huge pile of nothing. :( Even if this chapter is mainly dialogue, I should at least make an effort to make the setting believable! On this page, you don’t know where they are (right outside Lucy’s house).. at the time of shading I assumed I established the setting in previous pages, but pages should really stand on their own, man.

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32 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #4749

Emh… I kinda liked the ‘void’ at the ends… I was actually reading a bit deeper on it, knowing I might be wrong <.

Shen Hibiki April 16, 2010, 7:51 AM EST.

Comment ID #187412

Ah, now seeing this page follow on I can see Paulo’s blunt wisdom- very in character! Still, it didn’t seem to make sense for him to get angry at Mike. Glad he’s being level with Lucy though- everyone treats her with way more patience and respect than she’s ever earned from them, it’s ncie for her to start seeing that.

Roxor October 28, 2011, 5:28 PM EST.

Comment ID #216267

Holy crap, Paulo became nice, tactful and understanding all at once.

Kuro May 11, 2012, 11:50 AM EST.

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