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I seem to have a habit in this chapter where I make the last panel a huge pile of nothing. :( Even if this chapter is mainly dialogue, I should at least make an effort to make the setting believable! On this page, you don’t know where they are (right outside Lucy’s house).. at the time of shading I assumed I established the setting in previous pages, but pages should really stand on their own, man.
Emh… I kinda liked the ‘void’ at the ends… I was actually reading a bit deeper on it, knowing I might be wrong <.
Shen Hibiki April 16, 2010, 7:51 AM EST.
Ah, now seeing this page follow on I can see Paulo’s blunt wisdom- very in character! Still, it didn’t seem to make sense for him to get angry at Mike. Glad he’s being level with Lucy though- everyone treats her with way more patience and respect than she’s ever earned from them, it’s ncie for her to start seeing that.
Roxor October 28, 2011, 5:28 PM EST.
Holy crap, Paulo became nice, tactful and understanding all at once.
Kuro May 11, 2012, 11:50 AM EST.
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