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Candybooru image #5288, tagged with Carcharocles_(Artist) Christmas Jasmine Paulo PauloxJasmine


Comment ID #43359

Ugh, so much more I wanted to do with this. Not happy with Paulo's legs, and not happy with the (lack of) shading. Well, this rare piece of fanart from me is a gift to Raylene for the BCB Secret Santa. She enjoyed it, but considering her work on my gift, I feel like I greatly underperformed. Makes me feel guilty.

Carcharocles on December 25, 2011.

Comment ID #43360

hot legs.

It's all a matter of style, so all I criticize is but a simple friendly suggestion. I would have liked to see more value, even if simplistic on the characters.

Jasmine's eyes are full of life. I love them. Paulo's eyes seem to be staring into something other than Jazzie. If that was your intent disregard this, but if not, place special attention on the imaginary lines that the characters trace when eyes are set on a direction

There's potential in your work, I enjoy it.

Doubletails on December 25, 2011.

Comment ID #43361

Thanks. Yes, Paulo's eyes were an error, and I was disappointed that I didn't have time to do the values. That being said, it's pretty much my fault, due to procrastination early on. Maybe I should've taken one or two more days before I sent it in.

Carcharocles on December 25, 2011.