17. Blurry Memories, chapter posted 8/25/06

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Blurry Memories — Page 6
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Veronica’s Commentary

Souppy did tell me that the quickness of Blur’s decision was a bit unrealistic.. and that Mike seemed a bit selfish rather than thoughtful.. and I guess I can agree to that, I shoulda timed it better and Mike coulda said more.. but he definitely wanted Blur not only because he always wanted a pet, but Mike just.. I don’t know. Wanted to make a family for him.. so I felt he acted like he should have. I’m not expecting a heartwarming speech out of him! Mike was.. what, twelve when this happened.

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9 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #2782

The way the table broke seems kinda funny it looks like Blur broke the table not Mike.

Phillip April 7, 2010, 12:42 AM EST.

Comment ID #111549

Kinda strange for Lily to have stopped there for so long, if she was a traveler…

Hum… sounds fishy.
Something behind it?

Lyucs October 26, 2010, 6:01 PM EST.

Comment ID #137737

Lily stayed so she can be devious and plot and crap.
Speaking of plot, she’s a walking plot device.

GoodBurger December 21, 2010, 3:15 AM EST.

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