42. Invitation, chapter posted 12/7/07

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Invitation — Page 13
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Veronica’s Commentary

Sandy’s reason sounds like the biggest cop-out excuse of this chapter, but it really is intended to be an eyebrow-raiser as opposed to me just being a crap writer. She probably has to tag along with her father or who-knows-what.. either way it’s unfair for Mike.

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Comment ID #7722

What a twist!

UNIT2960 April 24, 2010, 12:45 AM EST.

Comment ID #135297


Baeleox December 3, 2010, 7:45 AM EST.

Comment ID #161238

Fate strikes again! ^o-o^

Nishakun May 14, 2011, 1:49 PM EST.

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