70. Piece of Cake, page posted 5/9/12

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Piece of Cake — Page 8
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oh dear it turns out we were in a flashback!!!!!

everywhere we go we flashbackin

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Comment ID #216079

Flashbacks! Who would have known? Talk about clever writing here. Poor Paulo, he tries to have a normal high school life but the drama just won’t let him go. Sucks to be plagued with constant thoughts battling in your head. He’ll be thinking about what happened for the longest time. And after that if he really wants to be with Lucy rather than Jasmine even longer.

Honestly though it’s this kind of stuff that makes Paulo my favorite character.

ThatGuy May 9, 2012, 12:05 AM EST.

Comment ID #216116

Poor Paulo, unable to build a snowman because Lucy’s on his mind. It’s sweet, the way he’s worried about her. He really cares. I think his feelings for Lucy go way beyond wet dreams and dirty thoughts. Doesn’t mean those aren’t included though. I doubt he ever had dirty thoughts about Jasmine … Personally I think she’s just a really good friend to him, only he hasn’t realized it yet.

LH May 9, 2012, 3:58 AM EST.

Comment ID #216128

Poor Paulo, again only trying to help. It seems to me that he is back on my cool character list.
Yet, I feel like the opinions of characters go up and down throughout the story. One thing is that Sandy used to be cool, now everybody hates her. (I don’t) And the opinion of Micheal has constantly went up and down through the story also. Everybody hates him right now (I don’t). I just find it kinda funny. Well, less funny as more interesting.

The Guy in the Background May 9, 2012, 6:29 AM EST.

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