18. Hot Pursuit, chapter posted 9/6/06

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Hot Pursuit — Page 3
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Veronica’s Commentary

Hi, Lucy! You showed up just in time for the UPCOMING ANGST. It’s obvious she was heading over to his house, amusingly enough.

Looking at this again, the bus itself didn’t come out as crappy as I said it was.. I really loved how I made Lucy and Mike interact, too.. definitely showing a side of him that is beginning to find her a burden again.

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15 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #64519

Beep Beep! It’s the crap mobile! XD god I love this series…

Elliot July 26, 2010, 11:43 AM EST.

Comment ID #168498

Oh no this will turn out realy bad.

Ventrex June 22, 2011, 2:44 PM EST.

Comment ID #204019

get out lucy. hes gotta do what hes gotta do so get out before he makes you.

Quiznos December 31, 2011, 4:25 PM EST.

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