30. Troubled Waters, chapter posted 1/16/07

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Troubled Waters — Page 11
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Veronica’s Commentary

Paulo looks so much more mature than his old self.. I feel a bit proud of that.. he looks younger in flashbacks.. which is hard to do with other characters, especially other boys. Mike essentially looks the same.. and it seems for a younger Lucy, her eyes just need to be sparklier and she just needs to have delicious flat chest. *Hit*

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20 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #25740

He should have kissed her instead of hugging her.

UNIT2960 May 23, 2010, 2:21 AM EST.

Comment ID #127815

Still don’t get it.

Paulo’s friggin’ awesome.

SushiJaguar November 17, 2010, 3:50 PM EST.

Comment ID #222072

Lucy, I highly doubt Mike went out of his way to nearly drown just for your inconvenience…

Crayon July 12, 2012, 9:48 AM EST.

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