30. Troubled Waters, chapter posted 1/16/07
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Author Commentary
Paulo looks so much more mature than his old self.. I feel a bit proud of that.. he looks younger in flashbacks.. which is hard to do with other characters, especially other boys. Mike essentially looks the same.. and it seems for a younger Lucy, her eyes just need to be sparklier and she just needs to have delicious flat chest. *Hit*

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Comment ID #25740
He should have kissed her instead of hugging her.
UNIT2960 May 23, 2010, 2:21 AM EST.
Comment ID #127815
Still don’t get it.
Paulo’s friggin’ awesome.
SushiJaguar November 17, 2010, 3:50 PM EST.
Comment ID #222072
Lucy, I highly doubt Mike went out of his way to nearly drown just for your inconvenience…
Crayon July 12, 2012, 9:48 AM EST.