Candybooru

this was my prediction on how that confrontation was going to go. all the members of the BCB crew have a little blame to whats going on in each others lives in terms of lack of communication.

jumping to conclusions and acting upon them doesn't help, either. but who knows. //shrug

a little "what if" comic while warming up for commissions.

didn't think this would be the exact dialogue, however. i was playing with some thoughts, too. also a good test of another style, but im not too keen on it.

i love everything about this

thank you

also a small note i just realize i should have paid closer attention to: i know she doesn't blame paulo for the car accident - low blow, low blow.

if i make edits to the dialogue, it'd probably be in a few lines in the middle:

"Thank God BOTH of my brothers are walking this earth, because Jordan could be in the ground right now!"

and

"Maybe I don't want help from the guy throwing punches and thinking with his nuts!!"

I'd also add an, "I don't want your help, Paulo!" after the enough on her plate comment, too.

i fucked up a lot on the BGs on this one too hoo boy.
my apologies!

"I waited for you" (while banging this other girl - then again I immediately dumped her when you came back, so that makes it OK)

Nice page, plausible. Paulo deserves most of that verbal kicking although the Jordan shot was a low blow, that wasn't his fault!

UGH UGH UGH THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS!!

Tbh I've always been super frustrated with Paulo and at this point I simply hate him. And I thought it was super unfair he was the only one throwing punches in all of this! I kept thinking about all the bad things Lucy went through because of him and all the comebacks she could throw, and holy shit, you came up with all of them! I love this! <3

Also your ship taste is good

This is SUPER good, and it especially highlights what Lucy most likely feels in this moment! And your art is LOVELY!

Preach

ohhhh this is extremely good. the dialogue is great and makes a lotta good points!! and i love your art -- the way you set up the comic panels feels very fluid & good. plus yr style is Nice

god this is so good..... go off lucy

paulo’s attitude that lucy owes him anything because he “waited for her” is sooo frustrating

this is exactly what i thought about when paulo asked "why she came back" like, dude.

thsi is fantastic tHANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PORTRAYING THIS SIDE OF EVERYTHING

She doesn't owe him, but I think trying to blame Paulo for the car accident is a real dick move. If she did do that I think the interaction would have went on longer IMHO. :u

this is how it SHOULD have gone god i love it so much

thank you guys for all the kind words - i really appreciate it!!

and yeah haha the car deal was a low blow i agree. i spent more time doodling than i did making sure the dialogue was feasable ;;;

and whoa. i did forget paulo did hound the shit outta jordan. man. i really do need to reread everything.

OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD....... i was planning on doing something like this but you beat me to it! this is way better anyway, i can totally imagine this. the dialogue fits the characters so much! the colors and your style are also super cute, lucy looks amazing

Hell yeah, love it when Paulo's called out on his BS. Also love August in this, he knows when it's time to walk away.

this is so beautiful. Honestly I wanted Lucy to speak her mind and at least tell Paulo what's up He took her being there wayyy too personally.

Lots of characters in the comic need a reality check nowadays, really wished this happened.

Great comic!