20. Hot Pursuit, original chapter posted 9/6/06

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Hot Pursuit — Page 11

Transcript

Transcript

*A downtrodden Mike asks a tourist in a baseball cap and Hawaiian shirt for directions.*
Mike: Which way to the bus terminal?
*The tourist smiles and points.*
Cat tourist: Oh, that’s easy!

[Caption: Later]
*Mike stands on the dock, looking angry.*
Mike: I could have guessed.

*Mike balls up his fists and screams.*
Mike: I hate tourists and I HATE THIS CITY!

Lucy: Nnghh..
*Mike looks up to see Lucy.*

*Lucy, eyes closed, rubs her head as she gets up.*
Lucy: Man, how long was I out..
*Mike approaches her, looking worried.*
Mike: Lucy?

*Lucy looks at Mike, exhausted.*
Lucy: Oh, so you made it. I figured you’d find your way back.

*Lucy stares into the distance, frowning and shaking.*
Lucy: I don’t think I can bear another minute here.
*Mike looks at her sadly.*
Mike: Me either.

*Mike smiles sheepishly and scratches his head.*
Mike: Well, I guess I’m done with what I was doing.
*Lucy looks at him with a neutral expression.*
Lucy: Let’s go home.

*Mike looks off to the side, annoyed.*
Mike: Well, uh, this was where I was told to find the bus terminal.

*Lucy points behind them.*
Lucy: Well, yeah! It’s right over there.
*Mike spots the terminal.*

*Lucy continues to point neutrally. Mike furrows his brow, stunned.*
Mike:

*Mike facepalms. Lucy smiles.*
Mike: I really really really hate this place..
Lucy: That makes two of us.

[Caption: And so]
*The bus is in transit. Inside, Mike sits and gazes out the window at the moon, looking forlorn.*

*Mike glances beside him, where Lucy sits, sleeping.*
Lucy: zz

*Mike reaches over to touch Lucy’s head. She frowns, shivering.*

*Mike pauses as Lucy begins to talk in her sleep.*
Lucy: I dun.. wanna drown.. Dun let me drown..

*Mike stares at Lucy with concern, his hand still hovering near her head. Lucy continues to dream, looking distraught.*
Mike:
Lucy: Nnghh

Author commentary

Veronica: She was left to go and wait for Mike in the worst place possible, huh?

It haunts her dreams :(

A preview of the upcoming BCB page.

Reader comments

Comment ID #111581

Damn, Mike, you really thought about taking the bus without even considering looking for Lucy?

That’s not cool.
bad, bad Mike.

Lyucs October 26, 2010, 3:01 PM EDT.

Comment ID #114288

Poor Lucy, she does so much for Micheal’s sake, taking on the gang guy (“Confrontation”) confronting her phobia just to wait for Mike. Seriously Mike, look at what she does for you.

The last three panels were awesome, they did an excellent job conveying the emotion. Astounding!

X-Strike-Fire-Dragon October 30, 2010, 1:44 AM EDT.

Comment ID #147050

it’s too bad. Yes Mike forgot about Lucy, but he isn’t the type of guy to not care about a girl’s feelings. He cared about how his secret admirers felt and knew how to react to them. When every it has to do with sandy he gets so caught up in it that he loses sight of other people’s feelings. It’s kinda sad, since he didn’t mean to hurt her.

blackmage February 12, 2011, 11:01 AM EST.

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