30. Troubled Waters, chapter posted 1/16/07

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Troubled Waters — Page 8
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Veronica’s Commentary

Here Paulo comes to save the day! I was originally gonna make Lucy save Mike all by herself but I felt that was a bit too unrealistic? You don’t really just sprout swimming abilities.

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29 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #127811

Paulo comes through when he’s needed most. Awesome.

SushiJaguar November 17, 2010, 3:46 PM EST.

Comment ID #140267

haha i just love David and Paulo sooo much :D

Dark Angel January 3, 2011, 8:56 AM EST.

Comment ID #212693

OH SNAP!

Mikanada March 26, 2012, 6:24 AM EST.

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