33. Onwards to Adventure, original chapter posted 2/23/07

Page 5 of 7

Onwards to Adventure — Page 5

Transcript

Transcript

*David and Justin hide in the bushes. David furrows his eyebrows.*
David: We must document her whereabouts and adjust our tactics accordingly..
Justin: Where is she?

*David’s eyes go wide. Some distance away from the bushes, a girl wearing a plaid skirt passes by.*
David: Ah!!

*The skirt belongs to Flower Girl, a dog with a gentle smile on her face. Her long curly ears are adorned on top with flower hair clips.*

*Flower Girl happily waters some flowers, one arm held behind her.*

*David is lovestruck. Justin peers with wide eyes.*
David and Justin: Oooh..

*David closes his eyes blissfully.*
David: Do you feel it? It’s like being among the angels..
Justin: She’s so pretty!

*David suddenly barks at Justin, frothing at the mouth.*
David: DON’T YOU LOOK AT MY WOMAN!!
*Justin recoils, terrified.*
Justin: AHH!!

*The two start to yell at each other.*
Justin: Your woman? But she’s a goddess!!
David: What’s the difference?!

*David’s expression turns blank.*
Justin: And I thought this was a spying missio--
*David puts his hand over Justin’s face, irritating him.*
David: Shhhhh. Do you hear that?

*David’s fur stands on end. Flower Girl has disappeared.*
David: SHE’S GONE!! The kidnappers got to her!

*David begins foaming at the mouth again as he chokes Justin.*
David: THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! JUSTIN “SPIRIT STONE” JOHNSON!!
*Justin cries.*

*David smiles, having released Justin, who remains upside-down on the ground.*
David: Hey, wait a minute! We can climb that building.

*Justin looks indignant, rubbing his neck.*
Justin: WHAT?!

*David smiles happily as he looks back at Justin.*
David: If we climb on high we can survey our surroundings and pinpoint her whereabouts!
Justin:

*Justin grits his teeth.*
Justin: Ohhhh no! You are NOT talking me into climbing up a building!! Nosiree!!

*David casually walks away and throws up a peace sign.*
David: You’re the boss!

*Justin’s expression drops.*
Justin:

*Justin runs after David, panicked.*
Justin: Hey, come back! I don’t know how to get home from here! Waiiiit!

Author commentary

Veronica: Aww, there she is! So glorious nobody but David is allowed to praise her, it seems.

I really like how I maintained a lot of the old expressions in this redrawn version, there is a lot of bubbly energy!

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Reader comments

Comment ID #7418

Long live David!

UNIT2960 April 22, 2010, 9:22 PM EDT.

Comment ID #71071

Yay! Another Grandia reference! ^.^

(I’m talking about the Spirit Stone reference)

Vetus August 6, 2010, 1:02 PM EDT.

Comment ID #106184

I’ve said that before, but…

poor kid >_<
now he really depends on David!
(And that can’t be good)

Lyucs October 16, 2010, 9:29 PM EDT.

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