didn't think this would be the exact dialogue, however. i was playing with some thoughts, too. also a good test of another style, but im not too keen on it.
i love everything about this
thank you
Nice comic.
"I waited for you" (while banging this other girl - then again I immediately dumped her when you came back, so that makes it OK)
Oh wow I.. didn’t even associate the “Jordan would be in the ground because of you” remark to Total Recall LMAO, I actually thought you were implying Jordan might have been suicidal because of all the events that happened to Lucy! Which I mean, is super plausible, Jordan was in a bad place during the whole ordeal. That’s super interesting hahahaha
This is such a great alternate event!! Augustus trying to take care of Lucy is so sweet ;____;
Nice page, plausible. Paulo deserves most of that verbal kicking although the Jordan shot was a low blow, that wasn't his fault!
UGH UGH UGH THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS!!
Tbh I've always been super frustrated with Paulo and at this point I simply hate him. And I thought it was super unfair he was the only one throwing punches in all of this! I kept thinking about all the bad things Lucy went through because of him and all the comebacks she could throw, and holy shit, you came up with all of them! I love this! <3
Also your ship taste is good
This is SUPER good, and it especially highlights what Lucy most likely feels in this moment! And your art is LOVELY!
Preach
ohhhh this is extremely good. the dialogue is great and makes a lotta good points!! and i love your art -- the way you set up the comic panels feels very fluid & good. plus yr style is Nice
god this is so good..... go off lucy
paulo’s attitude that lucy owes him anything because he “waited for her” is sooo frustrating
this is exactly what i thought about when paulo asked "why she came back" like, dude.
thsi is fantastic tHANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PORTRAYING THIS SIDE OF EVERYTHING
She doesn't owe him, but I think trying to blame Paulo for the car accident is a real dick move. If she did do that I think the interaction would have went on longer IMHO. :u
this is how it SHOULD have gone god i love it so much
This is honestly so good, I adore everything about this! I love how you have everything in soft colors, and then the last two panels are all grey; a very nice contrast! Thank you for sharing this comic of yours!
OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD....... i was planning on doing something like this but you beat me to it! this is way better anyway, i can totally imagine this. the dialogue fits the characters so much! the colors and your style are also super cute, lucy looks amazing
Hell yeah, love it when Paulo's called out on his BS. Also love August in this, he knows when it's time to walk away.
this is so beautiful. Honestly I wanted Lucy to speak her mind and at least tell Paulo what's up He took her being there wayyy too personally.
Lots of characters in the comic need a reality check nowadays, really wished this happened.
Great comic!
Lucy did not have to stab him in the heart by bringing up the car accident.
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this was my prediction on how that confrontation was going to go. all the members of the BCB crew have a little blame to whats going on in each others lives in terms of lack of communication.
jumping to conclusions and acting upon them doesn't help, either. but who knows. //shrug
a little "what if" comic while warming up for commissions.
visiface on February 22, 2018.