14. Field Day, chapter posted 8/4/06

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Field Day — Page 2
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Veronica’s Commentary

Welcome the new character ******! She’s the creation of Shinoka.. and you can see her DA page at creamynoka.deviantart.com. If there was one incentive to making this particular chapter, it was because I had a great idea on how to introduce ******.. considering how much of a klutz she is. You’ll see stuff with her soon enough.. the subject was mainly about her.

And still, I haven’t finalized heights so David continues to be shorter than Paulo. He’s growing, though.. maybe I can just say he took a puberty boost and that’s why he’s so tall now! Apparently, ****** is the same height as David, making her the tallest female! Wauughh.

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36 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #78655

My respect for David has grown ten-fold.Nuff said.

Mr.Red August 19, 2010, 7:24 PM EST.

Comment ID #139313

You sure overthink your issues with height, maybe they are standing on really uneven ground? I don’t really see it as a problem, we can differentiate who is who with their heights changing and so let their height change instead of worrying about it so much? Or not, it’s all good.

felinoel December 28, 2010, 9:25 PM EST.

Comment ID #197723


The awesome one December 8, 2011, 4:08 AM EST.

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