The smudges actually worked in this. its not bad.
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Comment ID #2644
Comment ID #5739
i agree with the extras, dave plz get cancer
Comment ID #7049
Rectal cancer, if you will.
Comment ID #7848
mac, stop getting high
Comment ID #14814
David may be my favorite character, he’s so funny!
Comment ID #14819
David is awesome. The lack of detail compared to other characters does the same job as an Ahoge in telling you about him. He can’t have an ahoge because he’s a perfectly normal-looking dog. (no hairstyle, clothing, etc)
Comment ID #18469
“Oii vey” ?
Comment ID #20229
David is a star athlete at any game, as long as he’s playing something else
Comment ID #57585
ah! that last panel! David reminds me of osaka from azumanga daioh! 
Comment ID #68866
Get cancer? That’s so mean!
(And hilarious 
)
Comment ID #74384
“please get cancer”
Comment ID #82300
MikexAmaya 4Ever 
Comment ID #86378
I agree with Chesire. David is Osaka. And that’s awesome.
Comment ID #88602
In panel seven I though I saw a mess-up as it looks like Amaya is tied to Mike instead of Paulo but I then realized, it was Sue tied to Amaya and not mike.
Whew inconstancy averted….
But wait why those are two standing to the left of ❚❚❚❚❚❚ when mike is shown to be on her left in the previous panels?
Teleportation powers activate!!
Comment ID #103011
If only, Lucied, if only…
Comment ID #152737
Ah, David. Every day, with every breath you take, you disprove Darwin’s “survival of the fittest” theory.
Comment ID #154245
What happened to all oof you guys?
Comment ID #161276
Her name is Kasuga Ayumu! Ayumu Kasuga for us. Osaka is a nickname.
Comment ID #162050
David we love u cuz ur speical…. and a perv
Comment ID #171613
GOOD SHOT DUDE
Comment ID #174322
lmao plz get cancer
Comment ID #176879
I’m beginning to like David.
Comment ID #182054
I can’t believe you actually managed to make a non-ripped off Caboose. Kudos to you!
It’s times like these that I feel happy I made David. He’s particularly amusing in this page.. and also, sorry about the smudges. I noticed this page is particularly messy in that way.. although I feel the lines and junk are clean. Probably one too many erasing here or there.. or just my hand sliding through as I was drawing. Alas!