28. Feline Festivities, chapter posted 12/29/06
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Author Commentary
Tess isn’t free from getting hit contrary to popular belief! I think that sort of seemed a bit like sacriledge.. Lucy doesn’t normally hit girls.. but sometimes she’s just pushed to the limit.
I kind of liked how the end of this page panned out.. you saw the ordeal with Tess getting hit and Abbey running to her rescue.. but it was in the perspective of Chirpy.. who was interested in something else, not them. It’s sort of like page three when Mike went into thinking about the dream while ****** was babbling about feeling deja vu. You saw the dialogue fade off as he went further into his thoughts.

8 Reader Comments On This Page
Comment ID #15518
For someoen who’s stupid in subjects like english David sure has a way of tricking people. If it was me I would go with Tess any time. If only if there was a real Tess out there I would so ask her out.
Alkaizer87 May 5, 2010, 4:52 AM EST.
Comment ID #61571
From physical wounds to physichological wounds
Hm July 20, 2010, 3:31 AM EST.
Comment ID #63714
Nyahaha! David, how can you keep getting her so easily?! One would think she’d learn what he’s up to!
Skykitsune July 25, 2010, 12:40 AM EST.