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Bittersweet Candy Bowl

15. Unfulfilled Fantasy, chapter posted 8/6/06

Page 2 of 14

Unfulfilled Fantasy — Page 2
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Taeshi’s Commentary On This Page

Incase you haven’t noticed yet, this is the first comic where I’m inking the panels! Before, it was just pencil.. I feel it was a pretty good evolution. I originally did the lines for the panels with freehand.. then I realized how CRAP it looked and I began using a ruler.. now I’m using a ruler as well as inking the panels! Improvement!

Anyway, the point I was really getting at is that you can see an inking mess-up on panel fourteen. *Hit for predictable*

12 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #1306

Hey… who was that letter from? I feel like I missed something.

Kan March 13, 2010, 9:27 PM EST.

Comment ID #1336

This is why you turn to the next few pages :DD

YOUR ANSWERS WILL COME AS QUICKLY AS THEY DEVELOPED

Taeshi March 14, 2010, 1:19 PM EST.

Comment ID #5756

thats common sense…

bored as hell April 19, 2010, 7:57 AM EST.

Comment ID #7062

yes, yes it is. might as well put a “GO TO NEXT PAGE, YOU DUMBSHIT” button on there somewhere. *facepalm* oh, wait, there IS!

MacGyver Adrian Caboose April 22, 2010, 10:49 AM EST.

Comment ID #7856

i think he was half-high at this moment

bored April 24, 2010, 8:20 AM EST.

Comment ID #9053

bored, have you nothing better to do than to yell at mac saying he smokes weed

Austin Smith April 27, 2010, 12:53 AM EST.

Comment ID #9073

of course he does. he just doesn’t want to use them.

UNIT2960 April 27, 2010, 2:01 AM EST.

Comment ID #18990

ABOVE THE INFLUENCE!!

Icaras May 9, 2010, 11:59 PM EST.

Comment ID #20278

NEVA!!!

this guy May 11, 2010, 11:42 PM EST.

Comment ID #57707

cool but it hurts

hyper July 9, 2010, 2:53 PM EST.

Comment ID #58939

and thats why pot is baaaaaaaad! ( family guy)

stranger July 12, 2010, 2:36 PM EST.

Comment ID #64502

anyone else find the contrast in behaviour between this Lucy and Lucy in the future quite cool? I can’t really decide if I want more of one or the other….

Elliot July 26, 2010, 10:30 AM EST.

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