Bittersweet Candy Bowl

17. Unfulfilled Fantasy, original chapter posted 8/6/06

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Author commentary

Veronica: SMOOTH, MIKE, REAL SMOOTH. Your nine-year-old self sure has a way with words.

Poor Lucy. Mike is definitely on cloud nine at the moment, but we all remember how clingy Lucy is to him.. and I guess this also helps to show the time of the scene.. since Yashy hatched on the first day of fourth grade (September 1).. so they’re nearing the end now.

Reader comments

Comment ID #23824

Oh shoot Sandy melted Mike! O.O

Cuddle Bear May 18, 2010, 8:46 PM EDT.

Comment ID #150634

I know I should feel bad for Lucy, but she’s just so abusive that I really can’t.
I really hope Sandy and “Maishul” get together in the end. So adorable.

bluesub6 March 7, 2011, 2:07 AM EST.

Comment ID #191783

As much as the whole MikeXSandy relationship is working out quite nicely and quite heartwarming, I feel sad for Lucy and I’m still rooting for MikeXLucy.

Harris012 November 19, 2011, 2:07 AM EST.