Bittersweet Candy Bowl

17. Unfulfilled Fantasy, original chapter posted 8/6/06

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Author commentary

Veronica: Hey, it’s Lily! We haven’t seen her in a while.. Yashy and Blur have mostly been running the show, honestly. Did she really only just appear in the first chapter? I don’t even remember her appearance before this! She definitely becomes pretty useful for dramatic scenes so there’ll be much more of her coming up..

I particularly like how I made her so.. assertive and taunting in this chapter. Pretty much how she’s meant to be.

In the side-story I made as a teen, she was the bloody QUEEN of doing that. Lucy would go on a tangent and Lily would spout out something that would make Lucy quiver in realisation… Lily was very good at dramatic one-liners. These days she’s just someone who is good at talking to and hopefully giving advice.